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| Originally Posted by ExERAC656 Here is the final version of the postcard (with Admin's Approval). Front:  Back:  |
OK, it's really getting good. A couple of minor suggestions:
1. At the end of the "Legal Notice", replace the period with an exclamation point. We're proud of this distinction.
2. I realize some people might disagree, but I would put a comma after the word "underpaid" in the addresss header.
3. I'd also capitalize "Overworked", "Underpaid", and "Underappreciated".
4. Since this initial mailing will be to U.S. addresses only, let's remove the U.K. mentions.
5. Change "10,000+" to "13,000+". It's gone up.
6. Please remove the line about Fan Merchandise. That link only goes to a page where I explain why I won't be offering any.
7. Why the space before the exclamation point in "Join The Community !"? If it's needed for aesthetic reasons, then fine.
If you'll fix these minor issues, then I say it's ready to go!
This card is terrific! It's ten times better than I ever imagined it would be or that I could ever create myself. My graphic arts skills are limited (one look at Failing Enterprise will convince you of this) so it's been such a nice division of labor to have an expert do this.
You're the man!
Admin