Final Version of Postcard... maybe!

[ExERAC656]

Here is the final version of the postcard (with Admin's Approval).

Front:


Back:

[FailingEnterpriseAdmin]

Originally Posted by ExERAC656

Here is the final version of the postcard (with Admin's Approval).

Front:


Back:

OK, it's really getting good. A couple of minor suggestions:

1. At the end of the "Legal Notice", replace the period with an exclamation point. We're proud of this distinction.

2. I realize some people might disagree, but I would put a comma after the word "underpaid" in the addresss header.

3. I'd also capitalize "Overworked", "Underpaid", and "Underappreciated".

4. Since this initial mailing will be to U.S. addresses only, let's remove the U.K. mentions.

5. Change "10,000+" to "13,000+". It's gone up.

6. Please remove the line about Fan Merchandise. That link only goes to a page where I explain why I won't be offering any.

7. Why the space before the exclamation point in "Join The Community !"? If it's needed for aesthetic reasons, then fine.

If you'll fix these minor issues, then I say it's ready to go!

This card is terrific! It's ten times better than I ever imagined it would be or that I could ever create myself. My graphic arts skills are limited (one look at Failing Enterprise will convince you of this) so it's been such a nice division of labor to have an expert do this.

You're the man!

Admin

[gp65:(]

All I have to say is:

"America...Fuck Yeah! Comin through to save the motherfuckin day..."

(I sing this when I am happy.)

When will they go out? Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss....

Great job, 656, great job.

[GP50 sucker]

Well Done!

[Popper1977]

Very nice work of art. The only "Concern" would be if the actual green-bleeding BRM or Area Manager happened to get these postcards before they got to their employees. But usually a car prep or MT is sent to get the mail anyway. These must have been mailed long after I left in 8/2004. I can only imagine the look on people's faces in Toledo upon receiving these.

Originally Posted by ExERAC656

Here is the final version of the postcard (with Admin's Approval).

Front:


Back:

Question....
how much would it cost to make the FRONT IMAGE into a T SHIRT and then wear it to local malls with the LOGO on the BACK of the T SHIRT,
Of course wearing a GREEN SHIRT No less
would this get a reaction from local shoppers or would it be just a waste of time and money??

-Bob from ILL

[hekiliko'olau]

Originally Posted by ExERAC656

Here is the final version of the postcard (with Admin's Approval).

Front:


Back:

Admin, I'll give you the addresses of every branch in GP36 if you want them.

[FailingEnterpriseAdmin]

Originally Posted by hekiliko'olau

Admin, I'll give you the addresses of every branch in GP36 if you want them.

Here's the final version of the postcard, in PDF format:

http://www.failingenterprise.com/doc...card_FINAL.pdf

You can take it to any print shop and have them print the postcards for you. Feel free to make your own and mail them out.

Originally Posted by FailingEnterpriseAdmin

Here's the final version of the postcard, in PDF format:

http://www.failingenterprise.com/doc...card_FINAL.pdf

You can take it to any print shop and have them print the postcards for you. Feel free to make your own and mail them out.

Do you have to pay for postage or you just print and throw them in the mail?

[FailingEnterpriseAdmin]

Originally Posted by Livamuka Sakonov

Do you have to pay for postage or you just print and throw them in the mail?

No, that printed thing on it is just for when we did the original bulk mail. You now have to put a postcard stamp over that.